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PostSubject: the yellow submarine (not really but...)   the yellow submarine (not really but...) EmptySat Aug 02, 2014 11:09 am

Name: the yellow submarine

Appearance: a 150 foot brigantine

Description: Malarkey Smith wanted a submarine but was unable to figure out how to seal stuff properly... so he named the ship he got as the "yellow submarine" despite it not being a submarine, or yellow for that matter.

the ship has 25 cannons, 10 on the left and right sides in the hull, 3 in the back, and 2 on the front. The figurehead is a pair of one-eyed pirates, who each hold one of the cannons that fires, in the front. The whole ship is rigged up to look like a merchant vessel. It is not quite clear why there are cannons there on the ship considering Malarkey has never had many if any, on board with him at any given time.

There are a lot of cabins on board, and unisex bathrooms lol

There are also life boats that can pop out of the side, from behind armour plating.

there is a full kitchen below decks, and a rather cramped dining table.

Abilities: The masts can be folded down if absolutely necessary. there are paddlewheels embedded in the sides, which can be steam powered, or man-powered....

the ship can sink to just below the water's surface, while remaining water tight, and the compartments sealed.

the ship can fire torpedoes from the front. up to 10 per topic/in between islands.

the ship is heavily compartmentalized, being split into 5ths, non-linearly. if one section is destroyed, the other sections can be sealed off to prevent other sections from flooding and sinking the ship.


once per topic, the ship can either fire a blast from it's back using the engines, that propels it forward 1 km, or moves the ship at 5x speed for the next 10 posts

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PostSubject: Re: the yellow submarine (not really but...)   the yellow submarine (not really but...) EmptySat Aug 02, 2014 2:06 pm

Quite frankly; no. You are neither a captain of a large crew, nor a marine. You have absolutely no need for a giant submarine, let alone one that... is like this. No to the 25 canons, no to the submarine itself, no to the torpedoes, no to the section splitting, and an enormous no to the 5x speed. The only thing I see about this that I am able to allow is the fact that it floats.
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